James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Thursday, October 29, 2009

...............My Enigma Comments

Rating: 3.2

You ask me what am I thinking when I look inside you
and you see me looking through you, as if I thought.

And how in the beginning, it was a point of issue in
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James McLain
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Dennis Ryan 03 September 2024

You appear to be an apologist for everything that's bad about America; you mouth tiresome platitudes, and we say "What a guy! Thoughtless! "

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Dennis Ryan 03 September 2024

By the way, wise guy, I am here today because I know The Art Of War By Heart, and have the scars to prove it.

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Dennis Ryan 03 September 2024

This is pure ungrammatical nonsense—laughable stuff in that it just issues from your mouth without thought.

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Chinedu Dike 11 October 2019

A poignant rendition nicely conceived in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing, James.

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Richard Wlodarski 26 December 2016

That two enigmas laid end to end, should never taste defeat. Your poetry appears to be quite philosophical. And at times, it's difficult to grasp. But when the meaning becomes clear, the light goes on, and the face smiles. Thanks for the adventure. I invite you to read and comment/rate some of my poetry. Thx again.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 November 2016

A poem of thoughts, asking its readers to think twice.

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Rose Kanana 25 August 2016

Deep message poet Know too that no two enigmas are alike and as such they are going to understand this and it helps you to grow together, while spiraling apart to meet the end.

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Darlan M Cunha 25 February 2016

Day after day the enigma, the pain grew up...

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Dimitrios Galanis 21 January 2016

How nice sounds it! Beautifully worled out.

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Gary H 07 September 2015

Nice, this is well done like it for sure. It made sense to me.

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Kay Staley 16 October 2014

I really dont understand this one at all, but I like the name and trying to figure out what the author is talking about and how I should apply it to myself so I get something out of it and learn from this author.

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Halana Williams 10 December 2009

seemed really good to me lol nice read

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 24 November 2009

Enigma plus enigma = Angina [Pangs] for Love… And never cure this enigma...LOL! Keep alive [loud laughter] Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK Please visit my page and comment &c: niv

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Rachel Butler 04 November 2009

'For the contrivance of complication is simple deceit' Rachel Ann Butler

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Tai Chi Italy 31 October 2009

Fantastic! Stunningly intuitive work here My enigmatic friend! I agree with Patricia! How you wrote this is beyond my capacity to imagine. Fabulous Poet you are... Smiling at you Tai, an open book! the longest mystery on record! lol

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. . 29 October 2009

'That two enigmas made into one, can never be defeated.' And perfectly is all tied with one string at the end of the frayed rope. IT

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Patti Masterman 29 October 2009

What an amazing thing you've written. 'For the contrivance of complication is simple deceit'; and the rest too, is genius. There must be so many doors in your brain, you need never go through the same one twice!

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James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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