My Eyes Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

My Eyes

Rating: 5.0


I have donated
My eyes
While still alive,
To my dreams
Interred aeons ago…

Hereafter
Let them dream
For my sake…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
MAHTAB BANGALEE 17 February 2022

sacrifice the precious of life but do not make you beggar in that sacrifice!

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Unnikrishnan E S 21 February 2022

Immense gratitude for the kind words of encouragement

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Unnikrishnan E S 21 February 2022

Thank you for your words of appreciation.

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M.J. Lemon 10 July 2024

This verse makes me feel like I'm in a dream. In just a few words you have managed create an entire universe. Brilliant!

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Alyx Thru Edge 03 July 2024

An short ode to the visual and sensual

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I often wonder, is it that what is visual more sensual or the other way round? Thank you, Poet Alyx

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Nosheen Irfan 16 June 2024

What a wonderful read! The relationship between eyes and dreams is very strong. Beautifully penned.

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Dreams are of two types, those bless us or dread us in our sleep and what we dream in the wakeful hours. One might think that eyes play no part in either. But they do, as Nosheen points out. Thank you Nosheen

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Poet Amber Piercy has added this poem to her favourites. Thank You, Amber.

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Immense gratitude to Dear Poet Mr CN Premkumar for appreciating the poem. The comment, feels great

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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