I have donated
My eyes
While still alive,
To my dreams
Interred aeons ago…
Hereafter
Let them dream
For my sake…
This verse makes me feel like I'm in a dream. In just a few words you have managed create an entire universe. Brilliant!
I often wonder, is it that what is visual more sensual or the other way round? Thank you, Poet Alyx
What a wonderful read! The relationship between eyes and dreams is very strong. Beautifully penned.
Dreams are of two types, those bless us or dread us in our sleep and what we dream in the wakeful hours. One might think that eyes play no part in either. But they do, as Nosheen points out. Thank you Nosheen
Poet Amber Piercy has added this poem to her favourites. Thank You, Amber.
Immense gratitude to Dear Poet Mr CN Premkumar for appreciating the poem. The comment, feels great
sacrifice the precious of life but do not make you beggar in that sacrifice!
Immense gratitude for the kind words of encouragement
Thank you for your words of appreciation.