My First Contact Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

My First Contact

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My first contact
Saturday,11th July 2020

Was it coming direct from the heart?
why did it hurt?
was the tear chamber really affected?
I found no reason to be stated

it was hurting me more
I was feeling so sore
the tears were about to pour
and shine the floor

It was my first contact
and compelled me to react
with welcome note
she smilingly greeted me

it went on smoothly for the days
making me feel good in such a way
that it became almost routine
to see her daily feel fine

she almost vanished from the scene
and not to be seen again
the news gave me anguish and pain
she was departed and gone

Hasmukh Mehta

My First Contact
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Mahtab Bangalee 10 July 2020

First contact With the girl The subconscious mind Feels a child of blooming rose bud

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 July 2020

Along with the days the memory of first contact goes on. This motivates mind and we feel the wonder. This poem is excellently and brilliantly penned.

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she almost vanished from the scene and not to be seen again the news gave me anguish and pain she was departed and gone Hasmukh Mehta

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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