My First Love Poem by Asif Andalib

Interesting. Very literary, sir.

Wonderful write Asif!

this one is awesome Asif, really great, I feel I could learn a lot from your pen that's for sure, this is an epic of a poem and you do the ancient hero's and gods justice with a piece that should last as the names quoted in this master piece Great! ! ! jon

Love poets were born when love failed and those succeeded in love wrote the same fairy tale and self same single line-they lived happily ever after. When first love fails it, as you tolled it rises like a phoenix or you may call it flowers from ashes with tears on their petals. To read such poems you need not fail in love but should have a heart to understand the tears. Nice poem Asif. My best wishes KAVIN CHARALAN Clarification: What is this list People who read Asif Andalib also read? Some poets' pages are having this list others are not.. If you know tell me.--Kavin

Lovely poems. Love really conquers all..

Now the ashes are turning into my love once again....I sincerely admire the phoenix.

Very beautiful images being built up in your poem, Arif. I love it!

Nice expression anf free flow 10....

Its soooooooo good,

A lovely poem! Wonderful poetic expression, brilliant imaginative faculty! ....My first love was burnt to ashes Like the phoenix....Loved reading your poem! ...................10