My Heart Spots Poem by Rini Shibu

My Heart Spots

Rating: 5.0


You are with me or not..
But you have given me a lot
Thoughts about you always persist
and reminds me that love exist
Your missing is much licking
and my heart is wishing
to hug you and  say
on this special day
You are with me or not..
I can feel you a lot
How far you are
You are my bright star
Who always dwell in me
and no one else can see
You are with me or not..
my heart likes you to spot
I will be there for you
Because I care for you
And yes  I love you

Tuesday, February 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: valentines day
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 14 February 2018

Love is wonderfully expressed through missing. Love brings every memory alive. A brilliant poem is wisely penned for Valentine's Day.10

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Rini Shibu 15 February 2018

Thank you so much Kumar..! ! !

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 14 February 2018

Thanks dear Rini for the timing of this lovelorn poem, just on the eve of Valentine's day. 10 for it. Happy Valentine's Day. Subhas

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Rini Shibu 14 February 2018

Thanks Subhas..Happy Valentine's day Big thanks for your comment on my poet page..feel good to be surrounded by wonderful poet friends

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Lamar Cole 13 February 2018

This is a very wonderful Valentine's Day poem.

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Rini Shibu 14 February 2018

Thanks for considering this poem good one..

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Practicing Poetess 13 February 2018

What a sweet poem! Just in time for Valentine's Day!

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Rini Shibu 14 February 2018

Thanks dear poetess..***

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