My Hero Poem by Rini Shibu

My Hero

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Why this distance and
the silence between us
Suffocates me
Restless here I am

Can you break this silence
Fill this place with laughter
Once again walk close together
Hand in hand, dance with beats

Let's change our steps
Love me more and more
You are my hero
And I am all yours

Sunday, September 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sister Frances 28 September 2017

You hit the nail on the head Rini..when you're in love the room is always filled with laughter.An honest, heartfelt poem.

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Rini Shibu 28 September 2017

Thanks Hannah.. Rini

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Kishore Kumar Das 25 September 2017

steps of intimacy choreographed invoking the lover in your captivating lines...

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Rini Shibu 25 September 2017

Thank you so much Kishore..

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 25 September 2017

Can you break this silence Fill this place with laughter Once again walk close together Hand in hand, dance with beats.It is a sweet stanza and my hero is a sweet able poem go on Rini jerry.

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Rini Shibu 25 September 2017

Thank you so much Soumya.. Rini

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Lamar Cole 25 September 2017

Very beautiful love poem about hero.

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Rini Shibu 25 September 2017

Thank you so much lam for your comments

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 September 2017

Love should have more depth. There is restlessness in life. Love makes this beautiful. Amazing poem is shared.10

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Rini Shibu 25 September 2017

Thank you so much Kumar for your encouraging words

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