My Heart's Emotive Motion Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

My Heart's Emotive Motion

Rating: 4.8


My Heart's Emotive Motion

Marvelous greatest glance
at the very huge entrance
bit farther
I saw the loveliest lady smiling
she was sitting solitaire
beautiful, lovely, and fair
I know her face
I know her too well
that loving smile
a long while
wanted to keep her for always
at my place
for my own
garden sown
for our own

but she's now serving another
just cannot forget her lovely glance
this was no romance
but my dearest beloved Mum's
appearance
my late dearest Mum's glance

a very tenderhearted person
never in oblivion
constantly in my heart's emotive motion

by Sylvie

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 26 October 2021

The title of the poem is completely justified as 'My Heart's Emotive Motion'. Nicely executed, five stars.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 August 2022

Thankj you somuch der Respected Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir, your precious support constantly flatters me. God's great Blessings may fall upon thee. Thank you for the 5 Stars

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 October 2021

Wonderful poem dearest Sylvia! So emotional and touching!

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Ibtissam Ibrahim 01 September 2023

when I read it, I imagine the face of my mother

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 August 2022

Dear Respected Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir, thank you deeply for your visit to my poem site. It is of great importance for me, I most appreciate that.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 August 2022

A fantastic poem....loved it. Top score

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 August 2022

Dear Poet, your precious visit and support are much appreciated by me. Thank you for the Top score.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 October 2021

A perfect poem of absolute love that deserves 100 stars..... : )

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 October 2021

A mother's smile and face is the loveliest ever! There is no one better!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 August 2022

My dear friend Dr. Geeta, your heartiest responses and feedback are most appreciated by me.

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