Rookie - 245 Points (01/01/1966 / BIRMINGHAM)


My love ascending through the clouds
From darkened days has set me free,
Awoke the warmth within my heart
That now can love and comfort me.

My love does speak so softly now
Where once so bitter now so sweet,
Where feeling was once lost to me
True happiness I now can greet.

My love is blooming like the flowers
Which in the summer gardens grow,
Their scent and beauty brings me joy
From darkness shines their colours glow.

My love is floating through the air
Too much for me to hold inside,
At peace at last my troubled soul
I can but yield, my love abide.

Comments about My Love by ANDREW BLAKEMORE

  • (4/6/2008 7:59:00 AM)

    This would make a great song Andrew
    It reminds me of ABIDE WITH ME
    Awesome lines

    Love duncan X
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  • Ann Beard (4/3/2008 1:57:00 AM)

    Another beautiful poem Andrew. Well done. Regards Ann (Report) Reply

  • (4/2/2008 8:51:00 PM)

    Way to go Andrew! Lovely rime and flow a great read! ! ! *10*! !
    Best regards! ! Friend Thad
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 2, 2008

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