My Love Poem by LaRon Green Sr.

My Love

Rating: 5.0

It's not a day that go by
I don't cry
the sadness, the happiness, the laughter
the love
it all went dry
Thinking about the togetherness we once share
vacation, walk in the park, romantic moments
what happen to our appointments
Things went astray
over our dismay
now we most pray
for better days
in our shoo-ray
Happiness is now restore
let's go aboard
the night ship
cruise the water of the sea
let misery be
while passion take us to victory
for years to come
you are the only one 'MY LOVE'

Mr. Prince (g.g.) 07 March 2009

nice happy and sad at the same time i like it

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Jacob Courtney 14 March 2009

very well done. keeping your love for someone after they have left. it is well put on how one can feel. beautiful

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Afzal Shauq 06 June 2009

a lovely poem with rich idea.. poetic flow is satisfactory... meaningful enogh.. a good and melodious one..these lines are meaningful more..I mean.. Things went astray over our dismay now we most pray for better days 10+++++

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Tracey Wynn 06 June 2009

great job and great poem. Its a very strong poem

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Miriam Maia Padua 07 April 2009

Good times to remember.... nice write.... memories described vivdly ..touching... 10++

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Eyan Desir 07 April 2009

Interestin poem...good write

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Mitchell Glasbrenner 18 March 2009

thise is good for my love if i have one someday.

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