my love...
you are the love of my life...
you are the one in my heart...
you are simply a beautiful rose...
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i like it... it is so deep and i totally luv it! ! ! ! keep written
I could really relate to this one... especially consider the route my life has taken today...
This poem is so beautiful! I really love the part that says 'I miss, us' so many people acknowledge that they miss a person but this acknowledges the fact that two hearts can make one person
this Poem tells a story and reveals the love and passion for which you hold I believe your Very talented and a very awesome poet I give you a 10 out of 10 you got it this feelings are extraordinary no matter what other's say express it
Justin, we all fall in and out of love.. Love hurts but life goes on, and down that road you will find a new love. Beautiful piece! Thanks for sharing...
awwwwwww...how sweet u still have feeling for ur girlfriend i love the way u show emotions on ur poems i can easily feel how u feel well done again justin
Justin- Thanks for your sweet comment about my poem, it gave me the chance to look at your work and I'm very impressed, can't wait to read more! I give this one a ten. -shannon
I KNOW EXACTLY HOW YOU FEEL! ITS HAPPENED TO ME TOO...EXCEPT IN A GIRLS VIEW...
awww ilove it.. i song for my boyfriend.. but he broke up with me.. : -(.. he broke up with me last monday... 6/22/09.. i still love him.... I AM GIRL... I AM NOT BOY