My Mind Is Green Autumn Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

My Mind Is Green Autumn

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Look at the the land,
Shake your hand
You stand beneath tree
You feel sure free
I am better with mind,
You know I am kind
We bind thread emotion
We see a demotion
Perfection touches soul
We know we see goal
Look at the little grass
Near you keep brass
Grasshopper instantly sings
Mind sure here rings
My mind is green Autumn sure
I know I am a soul pure
Stream of wisdom here flows
See sun light glows
Autumn is almost newly green
You have surely seen
Wonderful creator great is God
Soon we awake and nod.

Saturday, September 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,life,love,spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Mind holds memory of green scenic beauty and instantly decides to provoke thought process. Creator God is great and we nod before for his wonderful nourishment. Autumn touches pick of mind and a soul thinks his mind is ever green and he can grow from grass to tree. This is the theme of this poem in nutshell. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 27 September 2015

The poem delineates a wonderful philosophy based on the cycle of life from the standpoint of autumn. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem from which, I would like to quote: Autumn is almost newly green / You have surely seen / Wonderful creator great is God

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Pushpendra Patel 11 October 2020

Reading a nice Autumn poem, which makes mind green is very heart touching. This is the song of Autumn.

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Isabel Pimentel 10 October 2020

I love autumn. Your imagination is very powerful. Autumn looks s green after revival beauty gained.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 September 2015

All simple things we see provide inspiration through their color, appearance, and feel. Enjoy the sight of every little thing. Beautifully said.

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 September 2015

Green is peace! And, perfection touces the soul. Great work! !

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M Asim Nehal 27 September 2015

A true nature lover, you are. Keen observer and deep sense of nature, surroundings and environment is your speciality. I admire your poems. Great imagery with message to the world, superb. God is Great..

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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