My Mother Poem by merna ibrahim

My Mother

Rating: 4.9


When you leave me, I feel that I am lost,
because you are the angel who fire every ghost.
Oh mother, you are like the magnificent flower in my life,
I can't explain the care and warmth that you always give! !
Oh mother, you are a great gift,
I hope you would never shift.
You have carried me nine months and you have bore the pain
You have survived the pain which was drifting as the rain.
There are no words to express my love and passion towards you
because they are really really so true! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Liz Williams 09 February 2009

beautiful. I feel the love.

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Muhammad Ali 10 February 2009

10/10. i cant give more, there is no such option. no words i find that i can comments

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Indira Renganathan 13 February 2009

Yes that is the true love...even the mother's to her mother...nice write

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Wali Jamali 24 February 2009

Excellent Write-up. God bless you.

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Sara Here 10 March 2009

so true so deep so pure so emotional and so sweet....Great work keep it up.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 30 January 2010

Mothers, REASON of Life... they love us, they care about us, they worry about us............ Words can't explain their favor/ 10 for your Wise&Emotional Lines

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Tanvi Damle 20 January 2010

wow..i so luvd dis...itz realli beautiful

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Marieta Maglas 10 January 2010

nice surrealistic metaphor because you are the angel who fire every ghost well written poem dedicated to a mother 10

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Lina Ehab 27 November 2009

no comment..........! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! IT'S UNBELIEVABLE UR WAY IN WRITING POEM IS UNBELIEVABLE REALLY MERNA UR POEMS CAN'T BE EXPRESSED IN JUST ORDINARY WORDS U SHOULD BE CROWNED AS THE QUEEN OF POEMS....! ! !

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Ravi Sathasivam 22 November 2009

Sad poem. So emotional too. A nice tribute to your mother. Well penned. 10+

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