Fear Poem by merna ibrahim

Fear

Rating: 4.8


so many years.
so many fears.
so many tears.

The wound doesn't want to heal.
The pain is just too real.

It would destroy all the sanity in us.
But the time can't erase this cuss.

But the courageous who resist.
But the courageous who insist.
But the courageous who persist.

We need the bravery.
We must fire the slavery.

We must defeat our frustration.
We must defeat our hesitation.

We must vanquish our dread.
We must reject any threat.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noha El3wdy 25 May 2009

thats right. you are talented keep up

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Muhammad Ali 04 April 2009

YES, very pure Merna this all we need to learn... that we can face ourselves clearly and prouldly when against a mirror 10

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Kuji Soliman 28 March 2009

such a beautifull poem, what else can i say...(bssara7a keda, GAMDA! ! !)

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Shekhar Joshi 16 March 2009

ahh another good onw with a power packed subject love it good work

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Indira Renganathan 08 February 2009

Simple words with a strong subject..good poem10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 January 2010

so many years. so many fears. so many tears.lovely poem to be gifted with...10 no to shed tears for the want of fears it shall not bear life shouldn't go out of gear one may definitely hear when some one says O, dear come close and so near I may speak your future is not bleak you are on highest peak so to say you are not weak You will go on for weeks i may confide and seek but you don't weep promises always keep read mine....cry not

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 January 2010

so many years. so many fears. so many tears....lovely poem to be gifted with 10 no to shed tears for the want of fears it shall not bear life shouldn't go out of gear one may definitely hear when some one says O, dear come close and so near I may speak your future is not bleak you are on highest peak so to say you are not weak You will go on for weeks i may confide and seek but you don't weep promises always keep read mine...cry not

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 09 November 2009

We need the bravery. We must fire the slavery. Wise Girl! a great content defies all obstacles! ! ! that's our life full of fears from the mysteries, from the Future... that's our life full of fears from the wounds, from the Past... that's our life we have to unveil the mysteries and remedy the wounds in the Present, it's our chance to do that NOW! ! ! the Braves believe in their inner STRENGTH! ! ! a Brave 10/ Thanks For Sharing Your FEARS

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Siddharth Singh 01 August 2009

Very meaningful write. We must keep fighting our fears.

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HaZeM PaKKaR 31 July 2009

i adore this piece.. actually, i added it to my poem list.. please, let me know about your new piece.. keep writing..

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