I hear a voice
What is it?
I dont know
What it says?
I dont know
How warm...
Isn't it?
It's so good...
Isn't it?
Oh my god
What is it?
Some hot sand
A cool wind
An island
Like my mind
Who are you?
I know you?
I love you?
I dont know
I'm sleep?
Yes it is
I'm sleep
Whose this voice?
Whose this love?
Who know this?
I dont know
My god says the heaven...
Is under your feet...
For ever
Someone says you're woman
Someone says you're a man
But i think you're both
You're woman and a man
Now i know, Who are you...
You're mother...
My mother
I sleep in your arms
For ever, my mother.
boy... im impressed thats very very good touchy and clear...rt from the feeling heart great lines cheers
waaaw..mother is the dearest person, she's the one who's always there.... great poem.....
Today is Mother's Day here in the USA and I am getting ready to go to visit my mother's grave and bring to her some yellow flowers like she used to like them. Saeid, you have here a well crafted and poignant write! 10+++ thanks for sharing and keep it up! Love and Peace for always! ...
I like how you question your thoughts Saeid and this is a thoughtful poem about your Mother. Very beautiful and the last stanza is wonderful. 10 love Karin
Mother is ever great...flawless love...without any expectation in return...nice tribute to mother....thank you
'You're mother... My mother I sleep in your arms For ever, my mother.' Cheers,10+ in favor of mother.
It is good poem dear. you may have some ideas if u refer mine 'O, mother' I rate it 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A universal truth...mothers are the most special to all....mine now gone....yet always on my mind....and her wisdom and humor....why 'any good woman is twice a man'....I'll have to add that thought to my Mama Said poem.....thanks for sharing your memories of mom.....