My Nation Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

My Nation

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My nation is Satan’s shadow
So my life is full of sorrow.

They quench love’s thirst of the good ones by poison
They are extremely cruel and lack vision.

They do all the bad works in God’s name
The curse of the good ones follows them.

They have gone astray there’s no doubt about it
Cause they oppress the good ones to meet their greed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 11 October 2011

Greed is what makes a lot of people tick. Once the greed kicks in theres not much hope for them. Great poem.

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Vipins Puthooran 11 October 2011

I agree with what ''Ace of Black Hearts said..Greed, it can never heal if once it hit on mind...and its after effects will be more than arrogant.... Well written my friend

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Mohammed Albalushi 11 October 2011

Yes Agree with both of u and Ace of Block Hearts, well write poem

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Ace Of Black Hearts 11 October 2011

Greed is like a weed once planted it can forever grow without a single seed needed to be sewn. It kills all the beautiful flowers and vegetables and takes their stead. Then we comes to the great harvest their nothing left. A barren waste land is all that seen for miles. Defiled by this grotesque entity that bare no use to us as human beings. Great Poem, Cheers..

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Asif Andalib

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Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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