My Other Soul Poem by (De Va)

My Other Soul

Rating: 2.9


My other soul doth fly this night
By my side in astral flight.
Dips and curves we do in fun,
Playing happily in the night sun.
Above the poles, below the sky
Our hearts pounding as we fly
Together at last though miles apart,
We have known right from the start,
That we belong in this lovely form
Sheltered from the Astral storm.
Soaring high about the Earth
We joke and have abundant mirth.
Like children frolicking at play
It is here we wish to stay,
My other soul doth fly this night,
And the heavens smile at the sight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 05 December 2011

This is a really really good poem, i really love it. This is poetry at its best. A fantastic write.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 10 January 2012

'and the heavens smile at the sight' great poem Deva.i like it.

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Sajna Kailas 04 January 2012

great write with speculative words.loved it a lotttt! God Bless You Dear Deva! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 16 December 2011

Great rhymes, Beautiful Imagery, the Lovely contents..So De Va, it really deserved good likes from any readers..that was impressive work, keeep it bring a good uplifting mood...definitely i like it De_va :) _Unwritten Soul

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Silentpoet Grl 07 December 2011

Truly a beautiful poem! ... you have a way with words... carrying the reader to another place - Love these lines: 'Our hearts pounding as we fly, Together at last though miles apart'

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Vipins Puthooran 06 December 2011

A g'd rhym'd poem, I love it, , , well penning! !

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