Depression Poem by (De Va)

Depression

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You steal my soul and hide it in the deep
You take my heart away to turn me into a sheep
You come in the night and rape my mind
You peel my imagination like a rind

Depression consumes my soul and empties me of essence
Depression takes the fire of my passion leaving senescence
Depression sets me in a prison in the deep dark dank
Depression fills me with tears because of his prank

Monster deep in the darkness on a starless night
Monster flying e'er so low on a maiden flight
Monster claws upon my limpid body as I try to escape
Monster in my soul, to me it such hideous rape

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 18 December 2011

Beautiful imagination! ! And wonderful expressions! ! ! we feel sepression when our soul be in loneliness! ! !

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Mother, this is so deep, I truely believe that it is one of those you orbserve... And suddenly tears flow.. Depression.m can sometimes hurt real hard other just being exhausting, great poem

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 19 December 2011

superb! ! absolutely brilliant...great imagery and exceptional expression.

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Dave Walker 22 December 2011

A truly fantastic poem. Beating the demons is hard but it can be done. Its something you just have to keep fighting against. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, For Paul Blackburn. Its a true story.

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Cosmic Dreamer 30 December 2011

Depression like a dark cloud engulfs the soul in what seems to be a never ending darkness... Excellent poem...

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Ramesh Rai 11 April 2015

Beautiful rhyming composition. Love your ink.

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Darkangel Flyfree 01 November 2012

I agree with everyone else, depression is like a drug keeping you in the dark, never letting go. Until finally someone showing you the light! Great poem filled with so much emotion!

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Walterrean Salley 09 March 2012

Your poem helps to shine the light on an important subject. Thanks.

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Heyyou Boy 11 January 2012

A great poem and heart felt. # thumbs up! ! !

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Eric Cockrell 06 January 2012

depression is almost a drug... well written, good cadence!

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