I have written a poem today,
About beauty you all do say.
Who is the creator all do ask?
This is definitely a super task.
This task is done by him only,
I have realized it sitting lonely.
When I have to travel I know,
With devotion before him I bow.
His grace has sure fallen on me,
From inner spirit ever I do see.
I write always in praise of him,
by his grace only I do get vim.
My poem is loaded here in mind,
I have written this new in his kind.
Binding the pen in paper it links,
To drop rain ever the cloud thinks.
My poem is loaded and reviewed,
Many readers have soon viewed.
This gives me happiness every day,
By God's grace I gain this I do say.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,25 January 2015. All rights reserved.
Wonderful thoughts grow much with powerful wink to walk on paper. Poems scribble mind. A nice poem you have written sir.
A loaded poem is a good metaphor. At least you do not hide your beliefs, which are constant trust in God. Lately I have started to feel that about God, who may inspire my words.
With the muse of Poetry. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Superb. So beautifully expressed. Yes, i can see divine inspiration in your writings.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xbeautiful..beautiful powerful words. 25 Jan 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Dorothy A. Holmes xA most passionate verse! I am smiling here! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves to Sing 25 Jan 2015 by Dorothy A. Holmes | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xYour poem written straight from the heart and most divine! Full of selfconsciousness. I like your word play, especially the title, perfect choice. I have enjoyed a very lot 25 Jan 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply picture of Fay Slimm xSuch sincerity and power in these words of thankfulness my friend. A delightful read. 25 Jan 2015 by Fay Slimm | Reply