Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 189,951 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

My Nest Is Waiting For Me - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Evening is supposed to arrive
I have finished my daily duty
Now I have to go back with food
My children are waiting there.

I am a little bird, I am flying
My little nest is palace for me
Children are prince, princesses
They are waiting for little hope.

I am flying to go back to nest
Evening is very near knocking
Door I have to open and close
Children will take food in care.

I am a happy bird everyday I see
New light fills my life I rise
I know after dusk, dawn will come
In next day I will again fly.

Topic(s) of this poem: bird, evening, life, life and death, nature


Comments about My Nest Is Waiting For Me by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Pamela Sinicrope (11/21/2015 6:29:00 PM)


    I like this one! Great imagery. A wonderful bird who takes care of his nest. I like the flow of the lines too. Well done. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/21/2015 12:00:00 PM)


    well described life of a bird family my friend
    thanks
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/21/2015 11:08:00 AM)


    Superb poem Sir, I wrote a Senryu on bird's life.......Your poem covered everything in detail. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/21/2015 8:13:00 AM)


    Even the birds know to take care of their young and anticipate a new day (Report) Reply

  • Edmund Strolis (11/21/2015 7:46:00 AM)


    The next day I will again fly, such simple yet grand observations. Reading this poem brings peace and a relaxed feeling always needed in these busy times. Princes and princesses in the nest/palace....wonderful.10 (Report) Reply

  • Bakuli Bhakali (11/21/2015 5:27:00 AM)


    the circle of life entangled in hope, care and love..well penned! 10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/21/2015 5:13:00 AM)


    Beautiful poem with a philosophical touch and endorsing the affinity of a bird with off springs as well as the nest. Enjoyed reading the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 21, 2015



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