My Prayer Poem by Rekha Mandagere

My Prayer

Rating: 4.9


Oh lord, let others do operation
Spare my only child from separation
Take away all my pleasures
But ever forget to grant my only treasure.

My child's heart is full of goodness and innocence
It is the spark of great brilliance
He never thinks again to sacrifice
You are Papillion even to the world of malice.

The moon hides when my son smiles
Sirius blinks when he once winks
The mountain shrinks if his bullet pierces
The nature sleeps as he marches.

Free my child from the world of man hunters
Make him relax in the company of lovers
Let him sing and dance and smile for ever
My life's greatest fulfillment lies there!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Narayanan Ramakrishnan 18 February 2011

A very good poem, seeking the safety of her son and prepared for any sacrfice for that.A mother's love for her son and his safety is but natural and beautifully expressed.

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Wendy Thopliss 24 February 2011

Rekha this is a lovely poem, it show's the true love of a mother 10 Wendy.x

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Wendy Thopliss 24 February 2011

Rekha Rated you a 10 earlier but my comment would'nt go through, just wanted to say this poem is lovely. It shows great love from a mother for her child.

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Khairul Ahsan 25 June 2018

'The moon hides when my son smiles' - My God, so wonderful an expression!

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Let him sing and dance and smile for ever My life’s greatest fulfillment lies there! ..... nicely composed poem....10 Every mother wishes same His child should remain safe and earn fame as it is only her treasure the happiness can't be measured

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Jon Arno 17 April 2011

I enjoyed reading this Rekha....Very moving

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Luz Hanaii 28 February 2011

Lovely prayer and plea from a loving mother.

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Wendy Thopliss 27 February 2011

Your poems always show the love and devotion only a mother would understand. great woek.

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