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A Humble Advice

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Look at the glowing golden Sun
Brightens up the world with radiant beam
Never stops his shine even for fun
Ever stands as a leader of the team
Feeling the radiance of his lovely hues
My heart is filled with greater joys
The light rays said in lovely voice
Roads to reach the goals are hard
Never think from it a yard
Life is not a funny game

Every moment is challenge to tame
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Sunday, July 17, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: advice
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Dr Antony Theodore 24 May 2020

Patience is the key to win Tolerance will take you far from sin Always keep the spirits up Success would surely round you up! teaching virtues and finding joy in it...... you are spiritual. tony

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Chinedu Dike 09 February 2018

An insightful rendition set aside for sober reflection. A well texted and nicely thought out piece graced with beautiful rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 July 2016

Life is not a funny game Every moment is challenge to tame Wisely choose the future road Expand your horizon much more broad..... a marvelous advice to your son and to all young ones.......take future in your hands and rely on God............. God bless you for this advice. tony

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Khairul Ahsan 17 July 2013

Always keep the spirits up Success would surely round you up! Very appropriate advice of a worthy mother to a worthy son.

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Shahzia Batool 03 July 2013

QUOTABLE LINES! ! ! Life is not a funny game Roads to reach the goals are hard Wisely choose the future road Expand your horizon much more broad Always keep the spirits up Success would surely round you up!

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Babatunde Aremu 13 December 2012

Great! This is a good moral instruction. I like it, keep writing

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Chandra Thiagarajan 27 September 2012

The humble advice to your son is for all children.An inspiring poem taking inspiration from the Sun.Really nice and enjoyable.Thanks and best wishes.

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Walterrean Salley 05 May 2012

Great advice. Good analogy. Wish that everyone were as happy and radiant as the sun.

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Sharad Juneja 20 April 2012

An amazing poem...sheer brilliance

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Alto Thomas Jr 28 February 2012

Equal portions of joy and wisdom. A dash of cute, coy, and hope... a heady stew.

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