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My Schoolbag

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I used to have a pretty schoolbag That contained everything that was attributed to my school's days and My whole pretty memories, A pretty schoolbag is part of any student's life Simply because he needs or she needs To put one's stuffs in it, Careless students throw schoolbags Anywhere and everywhere Simply because they refuse to be organized or to be Interested in the school's life anytime, I respected my school, I respected my whole teachers, I loved my whole classmates, and I loved everyone and everything got attributed To my school's life Simply because I loved my whole school's life, My schoolbag meant everything to me, so It was great and wonderful In what it contained from my first days Until the moments of my graduation. ______________________________________________________________________

Friday, September 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: school
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Soran M. H 25 December 2019

thanks for sharing your work with us, wish you every success...10/10

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Bri Edwards 16 October 2018

(cont.) You had a fine attitude towards school, teachers, and classmates. To MyPoemList. Bri :) p.s. the ‘rules’ I learned in school, re capitalization and punctuation when writing prose, are NOT followed in your poem. Again you have leeway in these areas I believe due to “Poetic License”.

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Bri Edwards 16 October 2018

(cont.) Instead of “…my whole teachers” and “..my whole classmates”, I would use: “…all of my teachers” OR “..the whole teaching staff” AND “..my whole class” OR “…all of my classmates”. I’m pretty/very sure your bag didn’t mean “everything” to you, literally, but for what it was, what it carried, and what it represented to you, it MEANT A GREAT DEAL to you! (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 16 October 2018

(cont.) Yes, “careless”, here, seems to imply that they “care less” than you do/did. Not all people think alike! ! (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 16 October 2018

(cont.) To me, “pretty” implies attractive, something not all will agree upon [one student may find one bag attractive, and another student won’t]. but ….aren’t bags generally judged more on their usefulness and physical properties, NOT including attractiveness? Hmm? I would use “stuff”, not “stuffs”; I don’t think I’ve ever heard “stuffs” as a noun, but as a verb, yes! (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 16 October 2018

I’m not sure of the appropriateness of using “attributed” as you have; I’m really not sure, but ‘we poets’ CAN use ‘poetic license’! attribute: verb “1. regard something as being caused by (someone or something) .” (cont.)

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Clarence Prince 05 August 2016

School days were great days for me, as well!

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Kinyua Karanja 18 June 2015

You remind me of one of many thing: my finely woven schoolbag and yellow saddles when i was a kindergarten pupil. I respect.

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Soul Watcher 29 October 2014

nice and so much fun to read......enjoyed this very much.... please read my poems and leave your opinion

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Heather Wilkins 13 October 2014

a nice write about your school bag I enjoyed those days. Sometimes I wish I could go back and redo that time in my life. I would even take more interest in my studies. I always wanted high grades and would not settle for less. enjoyed your thoughts

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