My Sister Poem by gauri Vyas

My Sister

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Where will I go
Or she
I don’t know
Just I know that
We will walk along the sea
Together
We ate the luscious fruits together
And I loved her in any weather
The more she goes away
The more I miss her
Coz she is my sister
And I just want to say
“I love you”.

Tuesday, June 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,memories,sister,sisterly love,sisters,together
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

lovely poem...10 sisters are like mother taking every care like parents everywhere

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Gauri Vyas 24 June 2015

thank u Mehta Hasmukh Amathlal...it means a lot and the lines just really true

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Lyn Paul 02 August 2015

To have this amazing bond with your sister is very special. Even in distance your hearts are always there. A wonderful dedication.

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Rishabh Sethia 15 September 2015

Very well expressed..and yes sisters are life :)

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Susan Williams 18 September 2020

Just I know that We will walk along the sea- - - - - - - =-I like the visual metaphor

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Rajnish Manga 14 April 2016

A beautiful relationship with a sister nicely put across. Thanks. The more she goes away / The more I miss her / Coz she is my sister

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Shivangi Vyas 24 February 2016

This truly reminds me of my sister! ! ! lovely write...

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Vishal Sharma 14 October 2015

lovely words like your sentiments

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Ari Alsio 12 October 2015

Life is hope, and life is sharing, thanks for sharing.

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