My Sister's Poem Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

My Sister's Poem

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KIM

Keeping up with him
Is nearly impossible.His
Mind races ahead, his
Brain constantly in gear,
Always solving or creating
Logic problems that defy
Lesser intellects to figure out.

Beyond that, his chess playing
Ability surpasses many and
Recently, he has shown a
Natural talent for writing poetry.
Especially since he speaks three languages,
You never know what he will say next.

November 8,2014

My Sister's Poem
Tuesday, June 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: brother,family,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
After I wrote acrostic poems for each of my siblings, my sister thought I shouldn't be the only sibling without a poem, so here is the one she wrote for me.
As you can see, she is much better at poetry than I am. She has actually won many poetry contests and received numerous accolades, but is reluctant to publish her poems on Poem Hunter.

Yes, that's me in the picture. (The one without the beard)
You can see my pen in my pocket [read my poem O HOMEM DA CANETA] and something is tucked under my left arm but I don't remember what it was.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 16 November 2016

Oh This Is Awesome! ! ! ! ! How Wonderful And Heart Touching! ! ! ! ! Family Is Ever So Precious! ! ! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Beautiful Write! ! ! ! !

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Bri Edwards 29 August 2016

my compliments to your sister. based only on one of her poems and not too many of yours i've read, i can't judge which is the better poet. but you are both good enough for me. is the building a post office? ? ? a zip code above you? hee-hee. under left arm: Book Of Mormon, pilfered from church earlier that day? ? bri ;)

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Kim Barney 07 February 2018

I don't remember what that building was, but I do know that it wasn't a post office. My sister now has 15 poems online at this site. Go check the rest of them out.

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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