My Soul Is Deeply Entwined With Thee Poem by ANJANDEV ROY

My Soul Is Deeply Entwined With Thee

Rating: 5.0


I try....
Try hard
To flee,
But don't succeed,
As my soul is
Deeply entwined with thee,
They entice me
With new things
In their attractive realm,
I try my best
To run towards their dazzling domain,
But my efforts prove futile,
I never succeed,
For my inner self is
Strictly glued to thy old and refined things.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 24 September 2021

A beautiful piece nicely put together. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 September 2021

You have placed here a modest poem. Two striking phrases/sentences of your poem that I liked most are: ‘my soul is deeply entwined with thee' ‘thy old and refined things'. Full marks for this impeccable piece!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 September 2021

Dear Anjandev, the use of ‘thee', ‘thou', ‘thy' is hardly found in modern poetry. However, I relish this much popular and conventional lingo to my utmost pleasure.

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Susan Williams 23 September 2021

I enjoyed this read, my friend, challenging and satisfying at one and the same time! Gave you top marks!

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