My Spiral Dreams Poem by Nizamettin Esen Haymanali

My Spiral Dreams

Rating: 4.1


On the twirling wings
Of a warm wind blown
Through my rainbow
Colored spiral dreams
I run to your dreams

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leslie Philibert 03 November 2013

Nice write, I would (perhaps write it like this) On the twirling wings of a warm wind blown of a rainbow in spirals that runs me to you.

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Savita Tyagi 03 November 2012

A perfect little poem. Loved it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 August 2009

On the twirling wings Of a warm wind blown Through my rainbow Colored spiral dreams I run to your dreams creating oneness with colourful rainbow...it is simple with clear mesage.....10 read mine colour......anywhere and home bound

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Poet Resthreeia 31 May 2009

I do like this poem, as it evokes memories of an especially happy time.10

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Fiona Davidson 26 May 2009

Lovely uplifting piece Nizamettin...10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 March 2019

Warm wind blows on the twirling wings. This is excellently penned. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.10

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Rahman Henry 03 November 2015

A very short but wonderful poem. I like it.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 03 November 2014

When wings are dancing-winnowing- blowing the wind- heart throbs for someone a feeling is created and the feeling is of rainbow colors Spiral - deep and deep -solving un solving then dreams enter within dreams - complexity - undefined deep love..very fantastic wonderful that's what I can say :

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Liliana ~el 03 November 2013

Wow abstract Requires multiple read throughs

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Leslie Philibert 03 November 2013

A fantastic poem, the best I have ever read, you are better than Shakespeare, Keats, Ted Hughes, Sylivia Plath, put together, you should win the Nobel Prise for Literature instantly...

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