My Spiral Dreams - Poem by Nizamettin Esen Haymanali

Rahman Henry (11/3/2015 12:32:00 AM)

A very short but wonderful poem. I like it. (Report) Reply

Aftab Alam Khursheed (11/3/2014 2:06:00 AM)

When wings are dancing-winnowing- blowing the wind- heart throbs for someone a feeling is created and the feeling is of rainbow colors Spiral - deep and deep -solving un solving then dreams enter within dreams - complexity - undefined deep love..very fantastic wonderful that's what I can say : (Report) Reply

Liliana ~el (11/3/2013 5:32:00 AM)

Wow abstract
Requires multiple read throughs (Report) Reply

Leslie Philibert (11/3/2013 4:46:00 AM)

A fantastic poem, the best I have ever read, you are better than Shakespeare, Keats, Ted Hughes, Sylivia Plath,
put together, you should win the Nobel Prise for Literature instantly... (Report) Reply

Leslie Philibert (11/3/2013 4:25:00 AM)

Nice write, I would (perhaps write it like this)
On the twirling wings
of a warm wind blown
of a rainbow in spirals
that runs me to you. (Report) Reply

Savita Tyagi (11/3/2012 5:01:00 PM)

A perfect little poem. Loved it. (Report) Reply

Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/14/2009 11:05:00 AM)

On the twirling wings
Of a warm wind blown
Through my rainbow
Colored spiral dreams
I run to your dreams
creating oneness with colourful rainbow...it is simple with clear mesage.....10

read mine colour......anywhere and home bound (Report) Reply

Poet Resthreeia (5/31/2009 4:21:00 PM)

I do like this poem, as it evokes memories of an especially happy time.10 (Report) Reply

Fiona Davidson (5/26/2009 10:12:00 AM)

Lovely uplifting piece Nizamettin...10+++ (Report) Reply

Marieta Maglas (5/23/2009 6:33:00 AM)

Spiral curve connection between two thoughts is similar to the rainbow. This is the key to this poem.Epithet'' warm wind''comes like to acknowledge the tension of thought. A very beautiful poem.10++ (Report) Reply

Kesav Easwaran (5/22/2009 10:04:00 PM)

you express your dreams your love colorfully there...sweet lines...10 (Report) Reply

Ashraful Musaddeq (5/19/2009 6:28:00 AM)

'Through my rainbow
Colored spiral dreams
I run to your dreams'

Small and wonderful poem.
Love...10+ (Report) Reply