My Spiral Dreams - Poem by Nizamettin Esen Haymanali

Warm wind blows on the twirling wings. This is excellently penned. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.10 (Report)Reply

A very short but wonderful poem. I like it. (Report)Reply

When wings are dancing-winnowing- blowing the wind- heart throbs for someone a feeling is created and the feeling is of rainbow colors Spiral - deep and deep -solving un solving then dreams enter within dreams - complexity - undefined deep love..very fantastic wonderful that's what I can say : (Report)Reply

Wow abstract
Requires multiple read throughs (Report)Reply

A fantastic poem, the best I have ever read, you are better than Shakespeare, Keats, Ted Hughes, Sylivia Plath,
put together, you should win the Nobel Prise for Literature instantly... (Report)Reply

Nice write, I would (perhaps write it like this)
On the twirling wings
of a warm wind blown
of a rainbow in spirals
that runs me to you. (Report)Reply

A perfect little poem. Loved it. (Report)Reply

On the twirling wings
Of a warm wind blown
Through my rainbow
Colored spiral dreams
I run to your dreams
creating oneness with colourful rainbow...it is simple with clear mesage.....10

read mine colour......anywhere and home bound (Report)Reply

I do like this poem, as it evokes memories of an especially happy time.10 (Report)Reply

Lovely uplifting piece Nizamettin...10+++ (Report)Reply

Spiral curve connection between two thoughts is similar to the rainbow. This is the key to this poem.Epithet'' warm wind''comes like to acknowledge the tension of thought. A very beautiful poem.10++ (Report)Reply

you express your dreams your love colorfully there...sweet lines...10 (Report)Reply

'Through my rainbow
Colored spiral dreams
I run to your dreams'

Small and wonderful poem.
Love...10+ (Report)Reply