My Spiral Dreams Poem by Nizamettin Esen Haymanali

My Spiral Dreams

Rating: 4.1

On the twirling wings
Of a warm wind blown
Through my rainbow
Colored spiral dreams
I run to your dreams

Leslie Philibert 03 November 2013

Nice write, I would (perhaps write it like this) On the twirling wings of a warm wind blown of a rainbow in spirals that runs me to you.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 May 2009

'Through my rainbow Colored spiral dreams I run to your dreams' Small and wonderful poem. Love...10+

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Kesav Easwaran 22 May 2009

you express your dreams your love colorfully there...sweet lines...10

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Marieta Maglas 23 May 2009

Spiral curve connection between two thoughts is similar to the rainbow. This is the key to this poem.Epithet'' warm wind''comes like to acknowledge the tension of thought. A very beautiful poem.10++

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Fiona Davidson 26 May 2009

Lovely uplifting piece Nizamettin...10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 March 2019

Warm wind blows on the twirling wings. This is excellently penned. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.10

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Rahman Henry 03 November 2015

A very short but wonderful poem. I like it.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 03 November 2014

When wings are dancing-winnowing- blowing the wind- heart throbs for someone a feeling is created and the feeling is of rainbow colors Spiral - deep and deep -solving un solving then dreams enter within dreams - complexity - undefined deep love..very fantastic wonderful that's what I can say :

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Liliana ~el 03 November 2013

Wow abstract Requires multiple read throughs

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Leslie Philibert 03 November 2013

A fantastic poem, the best I have ever read, you are better than Shakespeare, Keats, Ted Hughes, Sylivia Plath, put together, you should win the Nobel Prise for Literature instantly...

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