My Tears Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

My Tears

Rating: 4.5


The sun spreads its wonders
Before it sets in
And my heart that has lost
Its very own
Suddenly releases its pain.

My tears clouded my eyes
And they are about to fall
I let them run freely
They flow like rain on my face
Make my eyes puff and face swells.

I never care
Never care at all
The overflowing tears
They release all my pent-up emotions
And sadness that wraps my soul.

My tears are the key
To this prison cell that
Perched inside my heart
Liberates me from
The mountain of loneliness.


Copyright 2023, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 30 April 2023

CONGRATULATIONS, dear Rose Marie, this gorgeous poem is today on number 33 on the Top 100 of the Best Member Poems on Poem Hunter. Once again my CONGRATULATIONS.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 April 2023

I just peeped again, this gorgeous poem MY TEARS is now on number 30. Just now! CONGRATULATIONS again with this gem, this Masterpiece! Truly most deserving, I like very much the building up of this fascinating poem

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Today is ranked as number 30. Congratulations, dear Rose Marie. A gem, a Masterpiece

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This excellent poem of Rose Marie is ranked #54 among the Best Poems of Members.. congratulations

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Today it ranks #50

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Indira Renganathan 13 August 2023

Crying out in solitude all our pains is a great relief- remedy for our beaten heart...a thoughtful write

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 23 May 2023

Sad, yet well expressed and stirring.

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S H 11 May 2023

A powerpacked poem

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S H 11 May 2023

Last para is heart breaking., you filled all your emotions in this poem.

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The realisation that " My tears are the key ….. Liberates me from The mountain of loneliness. " Really wonderful

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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