My Thoughts Poem by Akhtar Jawad

My Thoughts

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Whatever I can think,
Exists somewhere,
May be here
may not be here
but if it's here,
I may be lacking a link.
And I don't see it.
And if does not exist,
It's seed I have sewn,
It may take a million of years,
meanwhile I may stop breathing,
but my thinking is immortal,
with love peace, and a firm belief,
I shall go on dreaming,
and,
I shall come back on this earth,
with my sweet dreams materialized.
Sweetheart!
while looking at your beautiful face,
I am trying to recollect,
about a million years ago,
was I an artist and I had painted you,
or I was a player and you were my musical instrument,
or I was a poet and you were my poem.
Whatever my thought was
your beauty is an evidence that it was beautiful!
Let me improve my thinking,
let my dreams be more colorful,
and let me go to sleep for another million years,
let me dream, let me dream, let me dream,
when I awake I am sure
I'll see you with a few more amazing charms.

Tuesday, April 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: evolution
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 07 April 2020

from the millions years ago still you the human on the form of love, care and dream of beautiful world on the form of humanity changing time and the evolution sense makes all these step by step but some of inter-seer can observe it

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 April 2020

A poem of great depth. It enables a reader to be swayed with the thoughts of the brilliant Poet to think what is beyond life. A wonderful philosophical write.

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Bharati Nayak 10 April 2020

Whatever I can think, Exists somewhere, May be here may not be here but if it's here, I may be lacking a link. And I don't see it. And if does not exist, It's seed I have sewn, It may take a million of years, meanwhile I may stop breathing, but my thinking is immortal, - - - - A great philosophical write!

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 08 April 2020

Sublimity of art, a great philosophical poem. Recalls me that of Robert Browning's 'Andrea Del Sarto'. Beautiful piece of art.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 April 2020

Sweetheart! while looking at your beautiful face, I am trying to recollect, about a million years ago, was I an artist and I had painted you, or I was a player and you were my musical instrument, or I was a poet and you were my poem HOPEFULLY LOVELY MILLION YEARS DREAMING THOUGHTS HOW I WISH SHE WILL ALSO RECOGNISE YOU SIR JAJI

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Prabir Gayen 07 April 2020

" " Whatever thought came... whatever beauty I seen..it must be the dream of You" ' Good morrow to our awakening selves" " " Beautiful poem dear friend...thanks

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