My Universe Poem by Luz Hanaii

My Universe

Rating: 5.0


my universe collapsed
I was your love, your queen, your desire
the one that occupied your mind and heart
the one that loved and cherished you
my life was happy and full of peace
blooms were sprouting in my universe
the promise of loves rebirth

yet everything came tumbling down
it all collapsed and shattered
like broken glass beyond repair
my universe was a bubble
beautiful yet frail
so frail, it only took
a dream to burst

I was your love, your queen,
the one that occupied your heart
your mind, your every though
your desire, the one, the only one
well! at least in my universe.

Saturday, March 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: suffering
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

very touching... beautifully expressed!

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Lyn Paul 20 April 2019

Pure heartache when the truth is revealed. You have climbed many mountains. I hope you are almost at the top.

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Luz Hanaii 22 April 2019

I appreciate your nice comment. Yes, I've climbed many mountains by now. and almost at the top. This is a snapshot of the past, I'm doing good now. Thank you.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 May 2018

A saddest poem about the collapsed universe, love, loss and greatest grief. Amazingly created straight from the heart. Gorgeous write! Thank you for sharing, Luz! I do hope all is better now with you.Hugs and love from Sylvia.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 April 2018

Sufferings of deception in love, a sad and touching poem.

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