Fay Slimm

Rookie - 112 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

My Wish. - Poem by Fay Slimm

May the sacred grove
Of my soul's desire
Unfold and open
To cleansing fire,
So I can find love.

May the music of life
Fulfil it's part in
Healing my sick
And broken heart.
Then I can find love.

May sounds begin
Of a fresh romance
Before too long,
So there'll be a chance
For me to find love.

Comments about My Wish. by Fay Slimm

  • Kathleen West (10/9/2008 7:49:00 AM)

    Beautiful and sweet words that would touch anyones heart. Lovely and pure in it's intention. May God bless you in your search..Kathleen (Report)Reply

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  • Tia Maria (10/8/2008 8:57:00 AM)

    May the love that is sent across the miles to you, bring you comfort until you find the love that's searching for you.....
    That was such a heartfelt lament, lovely Fay, your poem touched my heart :)

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  • Tom BalchTom Balch (10/8/2008 8:06:00 AM)

    I really hope you get your wish, but till then you will have to make do with a 10, regards Tom (Report)Reply

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  • David ThreadgoldDavid Threadgold (10/8/2008 8:00:00 AM)

    Hi Fay. I think this is one of your best ever and put together so well. a wonderful read thankyou.10/10 Regards Dave T (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 8, 2008

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