My Wish Poem by Brittany Hafer

My Wish

Rating: 4.3


There I am on his chest
wishing he's the very best,
Sighing for relief
kissing him on the cheek,
hand on our hearts,
Never wanting to be apart,
And so I'm crying on his sholder
wishing we were older!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 06 April 2008

nice love poem...................

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Michael Smith 26 March 2008

awww thats a sweet poem britt

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Greenwolfe 1962 20 March 2008

Oh I just love it Brittany! Tenderness and sweet, sweet love. A very romantic thing. Gw62

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Malini Kadir 03 March 2008

Budding promise keep writing......

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Divina Boulangé 22 February 2008

aww, very touching! I love the way you write!

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Pranayee Gupta Rachamalla 27 January 2016

nice and lovely! nicely penned.....

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Darkness Everywhere 06 February 2009

very sweet well done

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Rakhi Jayashankar 27 September 2008

cute simple..........

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 September 2008

Sweet and cute verse. Love it.

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Helena Alvarez 25 April 2008

this is so sweet, cute and funny all at once i love it

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