Myriad Sad Songs-01: The Fallen Angel Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Myriad Sad Songs-01: The Fallen Angel

Rating: 5.0


Walking along gloomy paths

Of myriads sad poems-

Erupting Inside my heart,

With triads of erotic notes

Fading into one,

There appeared

The reflection

Of a face,

I have been after

For all these years.


As I walked a bit closer,

It appeared to be

A mere reflection

Of a pale face of

The fallen angel from

The western sky,

On the mute, white water

Of the pond-

Sweetened with the

Sorrowful childhood,

Somewhere near the

The solitary ivory temple

Where pious hymns of

Premature birth

Are sung like

Silent mirrors of truth.

Myriad Sad Songs-01: The Fallen Angel
Monday, October 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: angel,heart song,loneliness,longing,sad love,sadness,solitude
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prativa Rani 11 November 2017

What a set of lovely lines enriching the poem! There appeared The reflection Of a face, I have been after For all these years. Loved the creation sir. 10++++

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Suratha Kumar Rout 04 November 2017

Where pious hymns of Premature birth Are sung like Silent mirrors of truth. Love the poem so so much. 10+++++

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Alina Kaikeyi 11 October 2017

Somewhere near the The solitary ivory temple Where pious hymns of Premature birth Are sung like Silent mirrors of truth. Greatly artistic poem. 10++++.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 10 October 2017

Sweetened with the Sorrowful childhood, lovely line, thanks.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 10 October 2017

Where pious hymns of Premature birth Are sung like Silent mirrors of truth. A beautifully crafted poem. Thanks for the sharing. 10 for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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