Mysterious Expression Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Mysterious Expression

Rating: 5.0


Seeds come from fruits
Fruits come from flowers
And flowers are from trees
It is true and known to all.

One can't say which is first
Either the seed or the tree?
So mysterious is the nature
So enigmatic is the creator.

Whatever it may be
It is sure, cycle has no end
One can't find the beginning
And the ending of round substance.

Water to cloud
And cloud to water,
Birth to death
Or death to birth,
Day to night
Or night to day
We can't say which is first?
But each one is cycle.

However seeds or saplings
Need proper cares to be
Healthy and stalwart
These need manure, water, vitamins etc.

Children are saplings like
These too needs proper care
Parents must look after them
In spite of their several works.

Thursday, November 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,nature,riddle,spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It is a poem on nature that brings riddles. Children are our saplings, they must not be neglected.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 10 November 2016

Expressive poem, Nicely written, thanks for sharing..10++++

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Dogma Daniman 25 October 2020

Seeds to flowers and flowers to trees new amazing theme comes with mysterious perception. This poem is interesting.

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 August 2019

Your poems are almost always philosophic and full of spirituality. Here you have dwelt on seed and the tree, which came first. If tree gives out seeds thru flowers and fruits, the seed has all the potential of the tree in its tiny self. You have brought this out beautifully.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 November 2016

A great philosophic poem, Mahakul Ji is an outstanding thinker.

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Michael Walker 10 November 2016

I find that nature is enigmatic and mysterious, although the seasons and the day-night pattern are regular enough. All is cyclic, as you say.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 November 2016

Nature is very mysterious! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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