Nameless(Rubaiyat) Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Nameless(Rubaiyat)

Rating: 5.0


In my heart, somebody lit a flame
My verses flowed, without a shame
Rain, river or love? I know not
What soaked me, it had no name.



Nosheen Irfan © 2016
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Nameless(Rubaiyat)
Monday, June 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,muse
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is Omar Khayyam style rubaiyat.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I know not What soaked me, it had no name. excellent.10

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M Asim Nehal 17 June 2016

Whatever it be..........we are fortunate to read your awesome work....LOVED IT, LOVED IT.....

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Unnikrishnan E S 13 June 2016

Nosheen, So few words, but contains an ocean of poetry. In my heart somebody lit a flame, verses flowed. We can see the flow of verses, transforming into such high level of poetry. My wish is, Let more and more verses flow from your pen. Congrats and thanks for sharing.

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Nosheen Irfan 13 June 2016

Thanku so much Krishanan. Your comments give me a big boost.

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Barry Middleton 13 June 2016

I like this one even better than the other. A 10.

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Nosheen Irfan 13 June 2016

Thank u Barry. This is my first try. Your encouragement means a lot.

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Lahore, Pakistan
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