A Walk In Autumn Poem by Nosheen Irfan

A Walk In Autumn

Rating: 4.9


The leaves-strewn paths
I walk with steps wary
Lest the leaves cry in pain

The crunch of leaves under feet
I hear with ears sharp
Lest their music be lost on me

Trees are not sorry to let go of leaves
Leaves are not sorry to part with trees
Don't cry o heart when you walk on dead leaves.


Nosheen Irfan © 2016

Saturday, November 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,life,sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 24 November 2016

A walk of the life to remember, a phase in everybody's life when they leave their home, separate from parents, search for better things, migrate to different place. Life takes us through different stages, a thought provoking poem, Loved it...10+++++

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Unwritten Soul 19 November 2016

Wonderful, the expression was really transfered in my feeling...beautiful write Nosheen, like always..keep it up for more

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Bill Cantrell 19 November 2016

Let their music be lost on me...very nice poetry

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Akhtar Jawad 02 December 2016

Well that's cycle of life, old leaves fall in autumn and the tree stands waiting for new leaves in the spring.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 December 2016

trees don't wait they continue to procreate o Akhtar Jawaad sir

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Bharati Nayak 04 January 2022

Trees are not sorry to let go of leaves Leaves are not sorry to part with trees Don't cry o heart when you walk on dead leaves.----So beautiful!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 January 2022

It is now already the new year 2022 and I just found this lovely sweet poem, so adorable about A Walki In Autumn.5 Stars absolute. I have enjoyed tremendously, especially in this rainy new year

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Riza Braholli 04 July 2018

I chose this poem to read from you... maybe because it is according to my lyrical tastes, but I will read and other poems... you are a poet... I like the way you skip the landscape in the state your spiritual. thank you! Congratulations dr. Riza

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 June 2018

Hi Nosheen, Wonderful poem. Nice imagery, narrative. A true marvel

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Siddartha Montik 11 July 2017

The leaves-strewn paths I walk with steps wary - Teach me More God! The crunch of leaves under feet I hear with ears sharp - Its a music but sounds music Forgive me God! Trees are not sorry to let go of leaves Leaves are not sorry to part with trees Don't cry o heart when you walk on dead leaves. - And when the dried leaves say the touch your feet blessed me, did I hear that so God? ? all in your Creation! ! Bless it all!

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Nosheen Irfan

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Lahore, Pakistan
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