Nature's Whisper Poem by Aufie Zophy

Nature's Whisper

Rating: 5.0


A soft whisper from nature has entered my breath
I swallowed and inhaled it to my lungs' deepest depth
and now it is tickling my heart and my mind
It keeps humming a song of love and being kind

Whenever I feel lazy to give help to a friend,
it will make me reach out anyhow a loving hand.
The small voice gives me peace and harmony;
it awakens a sense of the beauty of reality

It encourages me to stop living based on my greed
It reminds me that grace and love is a much bigger need.
Dear small whisper of nature, please do not leave me
I cherish you so much, feel welcome to stay eternally

Friday, October 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,nature,voice,conscience,kindness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 07 November 2018

Well-written stanzas with cadence and rhymes, and an harmonious feeling of serenity.

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