Abdul Wahab

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Never Feed Your Body With The Dead Soul

If dreams break even in a dream
Yet you get hurt in your heart
The body is lying like a log
The soul is dead in frosty fog

So dare to dream in a dream
As the soul searches life
The life searches dream
The dream is the cream of life.
let the dream to break down never
Rather get it move like a super car
Stretch it like a synthetic rubber
Make sure that the soul is never dead
And the body is never dead soul fed.

Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 4, 2012
Poem Edited: Saturday, March 17, 2012

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  • Primrose TeePrimrose Tee (5/5/2014 7:14:00 AM)

    dare to dream in a dream..great

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  • Oludipe Oyin SamuelOludipe Oyin Samuel (6/13/2012 6:03:00 AM)

    Such is the trick; to harness the power of dream_ and feed life of its every speck_ lest it turns an ashen lark... Thumbs up.

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  • Nana Kwame NketsiahNana Kwame Nketsiah (3/18/2012 1:23:00 PM)

    Great work,100 thumb up for you.

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  • Michael WilliamsMichael Williams (3/18/2012 11:34:00 AM)

    Yes dream within a dream my friend.

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  • Rony Sk (3/16/2012 12:24:00 AM)

    It is a very good poem. I like it very much.

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  • Lusekelo Simwela (3/14/2012 2:45:00 PM)

    i waz reading on my 4ne, and i was mad dat it had to end, left me begn 4 mo, nyc writing...

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  • Salema Khatun (3/11/2012 12:58:00 PM)

    The poem is short but very sweet with beautiful meaning. i think the poem should be as popular as '' dreams'' written by LANGSTON HUGHES.

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  • Pheko Motaung (3/7/2012 11:40:00 PM)

    Abdul your poem is fabulous and outstanding.It's got everything! But most of all...it is a magnificent work of art!

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  • Harindhar Reddy (3/7/2012 11:55:00 AM)

    With many lines line these ye, a poet you hit my heart again and again with alliteration and rhythm. An en-captivating and soul stirring poem by you, oh friend Wahabji!

    Make sure that the soul is never dead
    And the body is never dead soul fed.

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  • Njuguna Peter MnyagiaNjuguna Peter Mnyagia (3/6/2012 4:04:00 AM)

    It's great n the art got me captivated. Good work

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  • Shahzia BatoolShahzia Batool (3/5/2012 8:25:00 AM)

    This poem is composed very thoughtfully...alliteration, assonance, consonance, rhythm, beat...all worked out well...

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  • Ekaterina M. PolischukEkaterina M. Polischuk (3/5/2012 3:06:00 AM)

    wonderful.So never let the dream to break down - - i love it, great poem. thanks :)

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  • Patricia Green (3/4/2012 7:06:00 PM)

    That is really good i love it

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  • Eric Cockrell (3/4/2012 4:43:00 PM)

    let your dreams be breath, let your breath be shared! good one!

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