Hopes are feathers, a wish is a bird
One may find this simile a little absurd
Hold on, do not lose patience
As I will explain to you the essence
Behind this there is a theory
I shall relate this with a story
Feathers, they keep the bird warm
Likewise hopes keep our wishes strong
Clip the feathers and the bird will not fly
Were it not for hope our wishes would die
My fellow beings, listen to what i have to say
Keep on hoping, what you wish for will come your way
Let your wishes, as birds, freely fly
As long as your hope, you never let die.
You're right Ravi, hope is very important. I like the rythm, very good!
rightly said... very well written.
true, hope makes things happen. positive vibes.good write.
really interesting and very convincing too...very well done..your poems structure makes it even more interesting
Amen. Cheers. Subroto
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
An interesting poem Ravi..thanks for sharing it.