New Sunrise Poem by Rebecca Navarre

New Sunrise

Rating: 5.0


Drinking is like being in a spin,
round and round you go. Thinking your
getting by though, you can't see out,
and you can't see within. It's so much
darker when you can't find the light,
and the soul feels so lost inside.
Destruction brings cries, and death to
lives. But sobriety brings, God's gift
of life, family, love, and a new sunrise.

Monday, April 29, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: death,god,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
For me this is what drinking was like.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 24 March 2022

Revisited today, for I was searchino for new poems from you. Found the gem entertaining. Once again. Thank you Becca

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 July 2021

An adorable creation of hope and positivity...top marks!

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Unnikrishnan E S 30 April 2019

Hi Becca, Very poignant poem. Drinking, for that matter taking to any type of intoxication, is running away from the present, from the questions posed by life. It is as if we close our eyes and declare it is dark everywhere. We have to just open our eyes to the light, His Gift, to love life, to love ourselves, to love others. Wonderful write. Thank you Becca.

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Rebecca Navarre 01 May 2019

Thank you! .. Unnikrishnan, For your very thoughtful and beautifully kind reply! .. You have an amazing talent for beautifully capturing nature within your poetry! .. God bless! ..

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