Nice Evaluation Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul
Nice Evaluation
Seeing beauty in this cloudy day,
We are evaluating new essence,
Sum of mind and perception,
Both have united in new heaven.
Entering into gateway of examination,
Sky has become hall of appearance,
Looking at new horizon mind motivates,
Universe evaluates actions as per laws.
Cosmic laws measure depth of action,
According to action nature reacts more,
Of course we are more aware today,
This nice evaluation awards us remarks.
Competing with each other here creatures,
They evaluate dependency and cooperation,
Having hope of higher status we proceed,
God is the true evaluator of our perseverance.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,02 September 2017. All rights reserved.
Gateway of Examination! ! Facing life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
God is indeed the true evaluator of our deeds….”Entering into gateway of examination, Sky has become hall of appearance/Looking at new horizon mind motivates/Universe evaluates actions as per laws”….a great pleasure reading this holy piece of poetry!
God is the true evaluator of our perseverance. A philosophic perception of life nicely penned.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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This poem goes perfectly with the season of Winter, when we are predisposed to contemplation, meditation, and general reflection on life. It is a healthy recuperative hibernation and this poem matches it perfectly.