when the sun descends,
and the day ends,
I loook at the sky,
to say GoodBye
GoodBye sun,
and also fun,
and welcome the moon.
it's time to with night,
to tell it all what you want,
and dont let it go,
till you finish all what you know.
then say GoodBye and wait for th sky,
till i come bright again
then say HI
welcome the bright sky..
Well written..bit confusion in the title though. But that doesn't matter 'coz the rest of the words was all right. Carry on girl..: -)
This is a very beautifully written poem and you did a very good job. Try to work on your spelling Wassila and your poetry will look much better. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for the invite. Your friend Lynn
Keep on writing dear daughter and it's nice, you see more things in the night.
Beautiful Poem.... :) Your poems have a well defined sweetness
Nice write but i feel it hadn't done enough justice to its title.
oh that is the boundary of our time for all our works to trudge the path of of life, beautiful write, i0+, thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
YOU WROTE WHAT YOU SAW AND WHAT YOU SEE, AND THAT'S THE WAY IT'S GOT TO BE. GOOD START FROM THE HEART.