Night Poem by Wassila Nader

Night

Rating: 4.8


when the sun descends,
and the day ends,
I loook at the sky,
to say GoodBye

GoodBye sun,
and also fun,
and welcome the moon.

it's time to with night,
to tell it all what you want,
and dont let it go,
till you finish all what you know.

then say GoodBye and wait for th sky,
till i come bright again
then say HI
welcome the bright sky..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Rams 12 December 2009

YOU WROTE WHAT YOU SAW AND WHAT YOU SEE, AND THAT'S THE WAY IT'S GOT TO BE. GOOD START FROM THE HEART.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 11 December 2009

simple and touching. nice, shan

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 11 December 2009

Well written..bit confusion in the title though. But that doesn't matter 'coz the rest of the words was all right. Carry on girl..: -)

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Lynn Glover 11 December 2009

This is a very beautifully written poem and you did a very good job. Try to work on your spelling Wassila and your poetry will look much better. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for the invite. Your friend Lynn

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Nimal Dunuhinga 11 December 2009

Keep on writing dear daughter and it's nice, you see more things in the night.

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Beautiful Poem.... :) Your poems have a well defined sweetness

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Such a cheery poem. Delightful!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 03 February 2010

i am the 5th to rate here and i rated it 10

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Kranthi Pothineni 26 January 2010

Nice write but i feel it hadn't done enough justice to its title.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 13 December 2009

oh that is the boundary of our time for all our works to trudge the path of of life, beautiful write, i0+, thanks for sharing

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