In a lonely night
Beholding the lonely moon,
But in my sight;
Not alone, a poetic boon.
When I am alone
I am not really alone,
Loneliness gives me wide opinion
For that is my real companion.
In a weary mood, I count stars
Some peeping into the young tree,
A star falls down into the dark
And hides when I long to see.
Into the dark some stars scare
And some show their twinkling dare.
Its great to see you maturing by time. I think longer lines can help you capture more meaning and imagery in your poetry. But nice work, keep up.
rateeN jadoN main ikola honda haaN asal wich ikola main nahin honda ikolapan mera saath dendi hai oh day naal vicharaaN which main dub paindaN. Write first in the language in which your well versed.
THANK YOU FRIEND MISSING YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS WHERE HV U BEEN
Loneliness gives me wide option to speculate different things in length and breadth.... brilliant
NIGHT WILL B onely if u don't follow me where bro u hv been
NICE WORDS UR RAMANA JI..Ishq ko yuñ gulab ki tarah mahakne do/ ashiane'ñ na torho chirhioñ ki chahakne do|. ON MY POETRY...LOL
In a weary mood, I count stars Some peeping into the young tree, A star falls down into the dark And hides when I long to see. BEautiful poem. simply beautiful my dear poet Jagdisch singh. thank you. tony
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very nice I WISH I had met you in BIKANEER when i visited ur place your line when I DO IT ALONE do what alone? ? ? ? ? ? nice poem ji wahe guru
thank you for such lovely line. our hearts are here in poem hunter world. we meet here.