Night As One Likes Poem by Jagdish Singh Ramana

Night As One Likes

Rating: 4.7


In a lonely night
Beholding the lonely moon,
But in my sight;
Not alone, a poetic boon.

When I am alone
I am not really alone,
Loneliness gives me wide opinion
For that is my real companion.

In a weary mood, I count stars
Some peeping into the young tree,
A star falls down into the dark
And hides when I long to see.

Into the dark some stars scare
And some show their twinkling dare.

Sunday, April 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: motivational
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
IN a silent night thinking about metaphysical notions.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 February 2019

very nice I WISH I had met you in BIKANEER when i visited ur place your line when I DO IT ALONE do what alone? ? ? ? ? ? nice poem ji wahe guru

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 06 February 2019

thank you for such lovely line. our hearts are here in poem hunter world. we meet here.

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Manpreet Singh 10 February 2020

Its great to see you maturing by time. I think longer lines can help you capture more meaning and imagery in your poetry. But nice work, keep up.

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Thank you veere, for your inspiring comment. It matters.

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Ravi Kopra 02 May 2020

rateeN jadoN main ikola honda haaN asal wich ikola main nahin honda ikolapan mera saath dendi hai oh day naal vicharaaN which main dub paindaN. Write first in the language in which your well versed.

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me poet yeps poet 19 February 2022

THANK YOU FRIEND MISSING YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS WHERE HV U BEEN

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 December 2021

Loneliness gives me wide option to speculate different things in length and breadth.... brilliant

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me poet yeps poet 10 January 2021

NIGHT WILL B onely if u don't follow me where bro u hv been

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me poet yeps poet 26 December 2020

NICE WORDS UR RAMANA JI..Ishq ko yuñ gulab ki tarah mahakne do/ ashiane'ñ na torho chirhioñ ki chahakne do|. ON MY POETRY...LOL

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Dr. Antony Theodore 26 December 2020

In a weary mood, I count stars Some peeping into the young tree, A star falls down into the dark And hides when I long to see. BEautiful poem. simply beautiful my dear poet Jagdisch singh. thank you. tony

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