Dark breeze softly blows,
As sounds grow gentle and sweet-
The sun has fallen!
A natural event beautifully captured in a romantic form....10+
Thank you, Kingsley, for those inspiringly welcome words. :)
the breeze after dusk comes romantically kisses heart whole night
That's so beautiful, Mahtab! I love the haiku form of poetry, because it can speak such volumes in a few words! Thank you for your comment. :)
Marvelous ascend of night fall captured through equally marvelous imagery. Thanks for sharing.
You are so welcome, Ratnakar. I appreciate your thoughtful and uplifting remarks. :)
Beautiful poem capturing essence of an event occurring daily in our lives which might be seen as ordinary. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you, Amir, for your very kind and thoughtful remarks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A concise and insightful verse. A beautiful haiku. Thanks for sharing.