Dark breeze softly blows,
As sounds grow gentle and sweet-
The sun has fallen!
A concise and insightful verse. A beautiful haiku. Thanks for sharing.
A natural event beautifully captured in a romantic form....10+
Thank you, Kingsley, for those inspiringly welcome words. :)
the breeze after dusk comes romantically kisses heart whole night
That's so beautiful, Mahtab! I love the haiku form of poetry, because it can speak such volumes in a few words! Thank you for your comment. :)
Marvelous ascend of night fall captured through equally marvelous imagery. Thanks for sharing.
You are so welcome, Ratnakar. I appreciate your thoughtful and uplifting remarks. :)
You are very welcome, Poetic Poet, and thank you so much for yours. :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful poem capturing essence of an event occurring daily in our lives which might be seen as ordinary. Thanks for sharing.