Dave Alan Walker

Gold Star - 4,807 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Night Sky - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Raging stars
looking down on us
wondering why
we destroy the beautiful
night sky

We kill everything
with war and greed
one day we will be left
in darkness with no one
else to blame but us

Comments about Night Sky by Dave Alan Walker

  • Babatunde Aremu (8/23/2012 1:38:00 AM)

    Great write. I like it. My poem on 'Changed Destiny' is in line with this. Keep writing great poet (Report) Reply

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  • (8/19/2012 8:57:00 PM)

    So true. We do nothing but destroy. Good write. (Report) Reply

  • Robert Wynn (8/19/2012 2:02:00 PM)

    A new take on stars and such, like it (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson (8/18/2012 2:24:00 AM)

    Raging stars looking down on us, - well they might be, with so much damage man has done to our earth, a thoughtful write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 17, 2012

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