No-Go Area Poem by Delicate Heart
No-Go Area
I draw your face as a chase.
In the space and every place.
To keep my eyes open wide.
For any intruder he would hide.
In your heart until he fights.
Against my rights.
What else could I do?
To expel your woe.
To win your love.
And end your row.
We meet as misty clouds.
Are to pour their rains out
But we soon depart.
As the sun rises apart.
Written with such............. Zeal i am impressed bravo... u got my 10
Its awesome n touching.. Its expresses the real language of love.. U r really a delicate.. i cant rate it as it is beyond figures. thanks 4 sharing. *Smile4ever*
WOW! ! ! I dont know wat to say! ! you surprise me everytime! its like... i dunno a very nice amazing poem! ! i love it and keep up!
'We meet as misty clouds. Are to pour their rains out But we soon depart. As the sun rises apart.' Soft and green. Love it.
hmm.. very well done. this is an amazing poem at the begining you started great. Then later at the last four... it was very moving and deep. i give you an 3 stars. keep it up and look foward for more of your poem
The last four lines express a depth of optimism resultant from a relationship ended by a strong woman. It is very telling of how a relationship can sometimes evolve from an unhealthy cancer to an empowering force. I liked the whole poem but the last four lines were especially good. I look forward to reading more of your poems.
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5/12/2024 12:45:02 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Then he has taken you, with your will, to ride not hide the cloud filled days..iip..be happy..