Bri Edwards

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No Pie For The Pig.... [disappointed Pig Fantasy; Very Short; Humour/Humor] - Poem by Bri Edwards

Pig went to Bakery to buy pie,
but sign on door read 'NO ENTRY WITHOUT TIE'.
Since no tie the pig had,
he felt pretty darn bad,
and returned to eat slop at the sty.

Topic(s) of this poem: style


Poet's Notes about The Poem

poor guy! ! ! i know how he felt. the original title was 'No pie for procine guy'.

fast forward:

well, Tomas Prato, in 2016, says i should have 'porcine', not 'procine' here in my notes. well, i DIDN'T say i spelled the word CORRECTLY in the original title! maybe i did, maybe i didn't. ha ha. but, thanks Tomas for the heads-up nonetheless.

:) bri

*- i don't know why there is and asterisk at the start of this line.

Comments about No Pie For The Pig.... [disappointed Pig Fantasy; Very Short; Humour/Humor] by Bri Edwards

  • Tomas Prato (12/17/2016 10:54:00 AM)

    Good Limerick
    Your notes....it should be porcine, not procine. Humorous, without being nauseous. (Report) Reply

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  • (2/9/2013 2:42:00 PM)


    this has wrinkled my face..short and sweet..tasting? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 15, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 21, 2016


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