No Pie For The Pig.... [disappointed Pig Fantasy; Very Short; Humour/Humor] Poem by Bri Edwards

No Pie For The Pig.... [disappointed Pig Fantasy; Very Short; Humour/Humor]



Pig went to Bakery to buy pie,
but sign on door read 'NO ENTRY WITHOUT TIE'.
Since no tie the pig had,
he felt pretty darn bad,
and returned to eat slop at the sty.

Tuesday, January 15, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: style
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
poor guy! ! ! i know how he felt. the original title was 'No pie for procine guy'.

fast forward:

well, Tomas Prato, in 2016, says i should have 'porcine', not 'procine' here in my notes. well, i DIDN'T say i spelled the word CORRECTLY in the original title! maybe i did, maybe i didn't. ha ha. but, thanks Tomas for the heads-up nonetheless.

:) bri

*- i don't know why there is and asterisk at the start of this line.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tomas Prato 17 December 2016

Your notes....it should be porcine, not procine. Humorous, without being nauseous.

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Brian Skyers 09 February 2013

this has wrinkled my face..short and sweet..tasting?

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