Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 741,126 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

No Shame On All - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

No shame on all

Saturday, April 21,2018
9: 34 AM

We call our selves so
But things go
Differently with concept
Only humanity has wept

Politicians say
Youngsters sometimes stay
With the irresponsible behavior
And bring discredit and dishonor to women

The human rightists advocate no death penalty
And in the absence of it, people take the liberty
Care for no modesty of a woman
And act inhuman

There are many people who lay down lives
For the protection of a woman
There are many instances of such nature
But we got to take precaution and make sure

In some of the states, this has become permanent nature
Even father does such heinous crime
Whom should we blame for this?
Our selves, society and all propagandist

As we have seen
The morality has taken deep dive even
We are no less than murderers
Yet, profess for being having good manners

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Comments about No Shame On All by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (4/28/2018 11:13:00 PM)

    Dear sir
    I touching poem on pinching social problem.
    Liked it..
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  • Anugo J Edoka (4/28/2018 4:54:00 PM)

    am not sure what kind of poem this is, but i do get where the message was driven to, nice try (Report)Reply

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  • Carl Roussell (4/28/2018 4:53:00 PM)

    You have stood with the victim in this poem. A well deserved Poem of the Day. (Report)Reply

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  • Savita Tyagi (4/28/2018 8:58:00 AM)

    A timely poem to draw attention towards the most severe problems of society, ie erosion of good values. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/28/2018 7:55:00 AM)

    Hasmukh, as always, you have written a profound poem. It is timely and honourable. Excellent write! Congratulations on Poem Of The Day! Very well-deserved for one of the best poets on this site! (Report)Reply

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  • (4/28/2018 7:51:00 AM)

    When I sit on my personal computer
    there is absolutely no thought in mind
    as to what is to be picked up
    as thought and written. These all things I leave
    it to the discretion of almighty to fill
    my mind with relevant ideas.
    So far I have been graced by
    Him and as result able to compose
    about 15000 poems.

    -Hasmukh Amathalal
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  • (4/28/2018 7:02:00 AM)

    It is not without good reason I said; we may be colonized, but we are not civilized... (Report)Reply

    (4/28/2018 8:00:00 AM)

    well said Sir! ! But for Tolerance of Nature we Humans would have perished long ago.... we are shameless So shameless! !

    (4/28/2018 7:59:00 AM)

    ..So well said! ! but for the Tolerance of Nature we would have perished long ago! !

    (4/28/2018 7:58:00 AM)

    We dont know what is civilization at all.. when we left the Path of Nature.. but for the Tolerance of Nature we wouldn't have been here by now! so true and well said! !

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (4/28/2018 5:50:00 AM)

    Care for no modesty of a woman
    And act inhuman.....it is really a matter of regret. We must behave good to a woman. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
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  • Malabika Ray Choudhury (4/28/2018 5:35:00 AM)

    A powerful poem. Thank you. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/28/2018 3:08:00 AM)

    a powerful worded poem that perfectly sums up some peoples bad behaviour? ................well written Hasmukh (Report)Reply

    (4/28/2018 3:57:00 AM)

    Commenting on this atrocity.

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/28/2018 1:30:00 AM)

    Humanity! ! Men! Let us protect the women among us.

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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    (4/28/2018 2:49:00 AM)

    A wannabe poet is not one at all. Your comments don't count. Stay away! !

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  • Drtony Brahmin (4/28/2018 1:25:00 AM)

    As we have seen
    The morality has taken deep dive even
    We are no less than murderers
    Yet, profess for being having good manners. in the present context of india, your poem is so valuable. dear Hasmukh. amathalal
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    (4/28/2018 2:52:00 AM)

    You need to actually read this rubbishy effort.

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  • (4/28/2018 12:42:00 AM)

    #200 on top 500 poets. HE SHOULD BE NUMBER 1. WORLD'S BEST.. THERE IS NO DOUBT (Report)Reply

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  • (4/28/2018 12:37:00 AM)

    How many POD does this non-poet get every year. At least five at the last count.

    We call our selves so
    But everything go..

    No explanation is necessary.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/21/2018 7:17:00 AM)

    S.r. Chandrslekha Government should ring the bell stating death sentence for rapist without hearing.
    1
    Manage
    Like · Reply · 2h
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/21/2018 3:53:00 AM)

    welcome
    Anne Thrope
    53 mutual friends
    Friend
    Friends
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/21/2018 3:52:00 AM)

    welcome
    Ibrahim Haruna MaiJamaa
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    Manage
    Like · Reply · 1m
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/21/2018 3:52:00 AM)

    Ibrahim Haruna MaiJamaa
    Ibrahim Haruna MaiJamaa Everyone blames everyone else.
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  • (4/20/2018 11:35:00 PM)

    F..uc..cking write in your native tongue you old B..U...M (Report)Reply

    (4/28/2018 12:54:00 AM)

    Not a poem but attempt to write in English.

    (4/21/2018 3:51:00 AM)

    tiem to fu.... your mom

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/20/2018 11:26:00 PM)

    As we have seen
    The morality has taken deep dive even
    We are no less than murderers
    Yet, profess for being having good manners
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