No, They Are Not Stars Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

No, They Are Not Stars

Rating: 5.0


No, they are not stars...
This, my dreams shine in the sky...

No, it not a rain...
They be tears ours of angels...

No, these not a grey hair...
It only begins a snowfall of snowdrops....

No, they are not stars...

Sunday, November 16, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: hair
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonya Florentino 15 March 2009

beautiful line, ... such sadness... 'no they are not stars' they are the pieces of my heart!

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Catrina Heart 13 March 2009

i guess this is much better if you are going to have this as a collaborative poetry...others will continue to finish this creation..........nice poem...10+++

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Costa Anakiev 08 March 2009

lovely because it looks unfinished

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Muhammad Ali 13 February 2009

nice to read this self-conversation... attractive poetic lines

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 18 December 2008

No this is not the sun But my anger blazing in the sky.............. wow good work..........

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Bert Bell 04 November 2010

Ah, Tsira, you write such lovely thoughts and ideas. Your poems are rich in images and warmth. Very nicely done.10

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Kevin Carney 23 October 2010

What a nice write, short but you say so much. It flows so easily.10+

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Kesav Easwaran 24 January 2010

life and the nostalgia it carries with it in the face of realities that awaits ahead...nice work Tsira...10

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 03 January 2010

Truly admirable...first you and then your poem :)

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 24 December 2009

beautifully you connect one to another...nice poem

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