Sunday, November 16, 2008

No, They Are Not Stars

Rating: 5.0
No, they are not stars...
This, my dreams shine in the sky...

No, it not a rain...
They be tears ours of angels...

No, these not a grey hair...
It only begins a snowfall of snowdrops....

No, they are not stars...
Tsira Gogeshvili
Bert Bell 04 November 2010
Ah, Tsira, you write such lovely thoughts and ideas. Your poems are rich in images and warmth. Very nicely done.10
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Kevin Carney 23 October 2010
What a nice write, short but you say so much. It flows so easily.10+
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Kesav Easwaran 24 January 2010
life and the nostalgia it carries with it in the face of realities that awaits ahead...nice work Tsira...10
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Truly admirable...first you and then your poem :)
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 24 December 2009
beautifully you connect one to another...nice poem
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Sonya Florentino 15 March 2009
beautiful line, ... such sadness... 'no they are not stars' they are the pieces of my heart!
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Catrina Heart 13 March 2009
i guess this is much better if you are going to have this as a collaborative poetry...others will continue to finish this creation..........nice poem...10+++
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Costa Anakiev 08 March 2009
lovely because it looks unfinished
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Muhammad Ali 13 February 2009
nice to read this self-conversation... attractive poetic lines
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Dr Hitesh Sheth 18 December 2008
No this is not the sun But my anger blazing in the sky.............. wow good work..........
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