No Tomorrow And Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

No Tomorrow And

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No tomorrow
Wednesday,4th July 2018

Yes no wait for anything
before it seals the fate for everything
get on fast with the target
and never get late

the year may have many days
but it may stall the way
if you show laziness
and bring boredom on the face

not all the days may demand
your attention to send
an immediate rejoinder
and positively offer

The days may not wait
and quickly move with the date
it has no going back
and you shall be struck

so wait for no tomorrow
as it shall allow
an opportunity to expire
and you shall be put on the fire

Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

No Tomorrow And
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
A Poor Choice 06 July 2018

This so-called poet just cannot write English poems. He has a weak grasp of the language shown in this poem. To put this writing in POD is a disgrace.

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But that first line itself - 'Yes no wait for anything' - it could have done well with a punctuation at least.... Smh...

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No Tomorrow And 06 July 2018

And what? The only thing more incredible than the title is the poem itself! Everyone should read and celebrate this atrocity!

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 06 July 2018

Congrats on your accomplishment. Thanks for the inspiring poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 July 2018

Very true. Just move on without thinking what is there in store for tomorrow. Very nice. Thanks on being chosen poem of the day.

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 July 2018

so wait for no tomorrow as it shall allow an opportunity to expire and you shall be put on the fire.........do not wait for......... do everything you can today. tomorrow is not yet in your hands. thank u dear poet. tony

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 06 July 2018

Nice write...I like this one: not all the days may demand Your attention to send An immidiate rejoinder And positive offer Congrats for chosen as the POD

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 July 2018

I embrace the beauty of your poetic expression! I congratulate you once again!

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Don't comment on my poems.

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He Hates You 06 July 2018

You cannot get him to communicate with you.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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